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[via]

https://youtu.be/jXQW-RqR21A

[via]

Eye of the Storm (Viankha Jesslyn)

Verse 1
Window cracks let the shadows seep
The violence creep
The hate runs deep
Pick up the pieces stitch yourself back together again
(Don’t give up, no)
You think you’re safe in the cradle of sleep
Then the nightmares peaked
What you gonna do now?
You can run, you can hide, you can blame yourself
You can face the truth not be someone else

Bridge
I know you
You’re the kind that runs away
I know you
You’re the ghost that’s come to stay
Stay with me
Shed your yellow let me see
What’s beneath
Or don’t tell me anything

Chorus
This is the heaven you’ve been looking for
This is the silver lining
The sun has melted your wings to bone
You can’t keep fighting and fighting your way out of this
You can be something to behold
Don’t let them turn you into stone
At night when it seems darkest stay in the eye of the storm

Hook
Stay in the eye of the storm
Stay in the eye of the storm
Stay in the eye of the storm
At night when it seems darkest
Stay in the eye of the storm

Rap
It’s automatic, electric, trigger finger
You’re all excited to see me lose my temper
But remember all the things you keep inside
You can never save it from the light

Bridge
I know you
You’re an aimless hurricane
You know me
Cause inside we’re all the same
Heart that beats
To the rhythm of the sea
Washing in to pull us underneath

Chorus
This is the heaven you’ve been looking for
This is the silver lining
The sun has melted your wings to bone
You can’t keep fighting and fighting your way out of this
You can be something to behold
Don’t let them turn you into stone
At night when it seems darkest stay in the eye of the storm

Breakdown
You can bleed secrets out of the simplest sentece
But the reason, the reason to lie lies between you and me

Chorus
This is the heaven you’ve been looking for
This is the silver lining
The sun has melted your wings to bone
You can’t keep fighting and fighting your way out of this
You can be something to behold
Don’t let them turn you into stone
At night when it seems darkest stay in the eye of the storm

Ending
Stay stay stay stay stay in the eye
Stay stay stay stay stay in the eye
Stay stay stay stay stay in the eye
You can’t keep fighting and fighting your way out of this
Stay stay stay stay stay in the eye
Stay stay stay stay stay in the eye
At night when it seems darkest stay in the eye of the storm

[midi]

폭풍이라는 거친 역경과 고난을 피하지 말고 정면으로 맞서 그안에 머물라는 내용이군요
아주 철학적이면서도 많은 의미를 함축하고 있는 좋은 가사라고 생각합니다.
후크 부분은 머리속에서 계속 맴돌 만큼 좋은 멜로디를 보여 줬습니다.
하지만 시작 부분부터 중반이 넘어가도록 음정을 잡지 못하고 화성에 맞지 않는 멜로디를 억지로 끼워 맞춘 느낌입니다.
밴드랩의 오토튠 문제일수도 있겠지만 이것역시 잡아내지 못한것은 비앙카 연습생의 실책입니다.
시창과 청음에 관한 공부와 연습이 더 필요하다고 생각합니다.

[looser]

https://youtu.be/jkzoGndAVwI

[looser]

놓아 (I’ll let you go)

그대 나를 바라보지마요 흐린 눈에 비친 내가 보여
자꾸만 작아지는 내 모습을 바라지 않아요 난
그대 나를 안지 말아요 그대 품에 안긴 내가 싫어
조금씩 커지는 마음 이제는 버거워 난

너는 애써 모르고 있어 나는 바람관 달리 무너져 가고 있어
우린 헛 된 기대 달리 모순된 희망고문만 계속 내뱉고 있어 여전히 우린 서로를 몰라

흐르는 눈물을 지워 다 그만해
엉켜진 마음을 다 잡아 I’ll let you go

넌 지금 아직도 날 보며 웃고만 있어
그 미소 뒤에 숨겨진 날 지워가는 네 눈을 알아
오늘 밤엔 넌 나에게 솔직히 말해야만 해
자꾸 자꾸 더 멀어지는 네 맘을

날 지워가는 네 눈을 알아
더 멀어지는 네 맘을

시간은 또 계속해 흘러가고 있어 그 틈 사이에 우리는 오래 갇혀있어
서로를 위하기 때문이라는건 다 거짓말 서로도 이미 틀린거 알고 있잖아
아물지 않은 깊은 상처는 다른 너의 표정을 알 수 있어
이건 아닌데 그만 해야 해 하는 걸 우린 지금부터 해야 해 이제는

떨리는 목소리는 안돼 날 묻어둬
하얘지는 머리를 다잡아 I’ll let you go

넌 지금 아직도 날 보며 웃고만 있어
그 미소 뒤에 숨겨진 날 지워가는 네 눈을 알아
오늘 밤엔 넌 나에게 솔직히 말해야만 해
자꾸 자꾸 더 멀어지는 네 맘을

오늘 하루종일 난 괜찮은 척 하고만 있어
그 모습 뒤에 감춰진 널 기억하는 내 눈을 알아
이 새벽에 날 찾아와 흐른 눈물 감출 수 없어
계속 계속 널 따라가는 내 맘을

날 지워가는 네 눈을 알아
더 멀어지는 네 맘을

[midi]

2000년대 많이 유행했던 발라드 가사 같다는 느낌을 받았습니다. 요즘 HOXY 연애중 인가요? ^^
사랑이라는 주제는 시대를 불문하고 모든이의 화두이긴 합니다만 우리는 아이돌 음악을 하는 만큼 가슴아픈 사랑이야기 보다는 조금 더 가벼우면서도 진지한 이야기를 해볼수 있을것 같습니다.

멜로디 역시 발라드 감성이 충만한 멜로디 입니다. 좀더 트렌디한 음악을 많이 찾아서 듣고 여러가지 컨셉의 다양한 멜로디를 접해 보는 연습이 필요합니다. 최신 팝송 위주로 많이 커버를 해보는게 좋을것 같습니다.

[sonya]

[sonya]

https://youtu.be/AIUWq829zt4

[sonya]

Sofy – What If?
(Verse 1)
Tell me why I have to spinning?
Every moment living locked up, losing myself now.
Tell me if I can get it?
Round and round keep running, but what if there’s no way out..
Oh every day oh every midnight I keep looking up at the sky,
Oh I can feel something big is coming.. come in.

(Rap)
Right in my zone? Right in my zone!
The sound deafens me, but whatever, I’m ready to go!
I don’t see a stop sign, wh-what? it’s fun!
Let’s go together forever, we should at least try.

(Pre 1)
Oh what is true? Which way to go?
I’d like to know, I’d like to know..
A fairy tale becomes our life (Whowouuu)

(Chorus)
Keep on shining you are the brightest light,
Keep your wand and let’s have some fun tonight.
Ooo oo oh, be ready to go o-o-o
I know you’re scared but just follow me, come on!
I want to be your destiny, for al (x2)
I’m waiting for you!

I’m waiting for you
I’m waiting for you, you
I’m waiting for you, dudu dudu
I’m waiting for you,
I’m waiting for you you you you you
All dreams come true.

(Verse 2)
Everybody is watching now, and I’m going crazy cause of this crowd.
Do I deserve all this?
Should I take or should I miss?

[midi]

와우 제가 이 트랙을 만들면서 상상했던 사운드와 거의 흡사한 느낌의 결과물이 나왔네요.
앞으로의 장래가 매우 기대 됩니다. 2절까지 완료해서 제출했으면 좋았겠어요 개인적으로도 2절이 꼭 들어보고 싶네요
가사가 조금 산만하긴 하지만 내용도 무난하고 곡과 잘 붙는 것 같습니다.
작업 툴은 무엇을 사용했는지 댓글로 남겨 주세요
감사힙니다.

[polina]

https://youtu.be/-V13grJhjlg

[polina]

Close your eyes
The stars can be a blinding lights
Never stop
The right path has it’s down and ups
Take a deep breath
Run forward to your final place
And don’t give up
I know you must be tired to fight

Never say you lonely cause i’ll always be right here
Open up and tell the things that ever made you fear
Can you just imagine everything that waits for you
Your start might be really slow but end will be incredible

Step by step you’re gonna make it
Just believe and you will get it right
After rain comes a rainbow
You’ll see it if you can hold out longer
Step by step you’re gonna make it
Just believe and you will get it right
After hundred times of trying
Just try one more time

Just try one more time
Just try one more time

[midi]

가사도 멜로디도 무난하지만 무난한것이 좋은것은 아닙니다. 특별함이 필요합니다.
특별한 이야기를 만드는 가장 쉬운 방법은 당신의 이야기를 하는것 입니다.
당신만큼 특별한 것은 없기 때문입니다.
거기에 상상력을 좀더 첨가한다면 더 좋은 이야기를 만들수 있을겁니다.
앞으로 많은 발전이 기대됩니다. 노력해 주세요

[maria]

https://youtu.be/nn3Ayv2-nUc

[maria]

SPRINGTIME

[VERSE 1]
Everyday I was thinking about this cold winter to go away.
This thick ice crust on my heart been here forever and forever’ll be there.
I wanna hope that you’re not one of those who play with people just to please themselves
So imma wait, take a step towards me, let’s loose our heads and together dive in right into the spring.

The world is spinning, the seasons are changing, but it seems like you and me are stuck in this winter to be forever freezing.
Don’t be so cruel to me, let me take a breath of fresh air
The tender breeze of our feelings will take us anywhere.
Listen up boy I ain’t got the time to walk around
Every time you push me further I think that I gotta get you our of my mind.
So look around. Listen carefully and think about it
Cause until temperature drop you should realize that the spring is coming

[CHORUS]
Oh, I wanna look into your eyes
Make the winter go away cause we’re running out of time and I
Oh, don’t let the water turn to ice
Be brave enough to get butterflies, follow my lead.
Oh, I’m into you, head in the clouds and rainbows in the sky.
Make our love shine brighter than the sun, and finally will come the

Springtime, springtime
And flowers blooming in our hearts, here finally comes the
Springtime, springtime
Love gleaming in the air. I wanna whisper it in your ear:
Oh, I’m into you, head in the clouds and rainbows in the sky. Are you ready for
Springtime, springtime
Let’s sing this song and go through gardens barefoot on the grass

[midi]

봄이 오기를 기다리는 마음을 잘 표현해 주었네요.
처음 해보는것 치고는 잘 했다고 생각합니다. 화성학을 배우고 코러스를 넣는 법을 배운다면 좋을것 같습니다.
랩의 플로우가 좋습니다. 라임을 맞추는 연습도 도움이 될것 같네요.
기존곡들의 MR을 다운 받아 멜로디를 만드는 연습을 하면 많은 도움이 될것입니다.
감사합니다.

[Lita]

https://youtu.be/ARdjyOQ2sMk

[Lita]

‘U’ – Thalia

[Intro]
Baby I just want u
Yeah it’s u
Please don’t let go
Just sing with me, c’mon…

[Verse 1]
Your the one I dream of
Your the one I needed … everyday
Baby please just stay with me
Because you always be my superhero

[Pre-Chorus]
Ur my Ironman
Ur my Superman
Ur the only one Everything to me
Please just stay with me
Always be my side
I will always be your Cinderella

[Verse 2]
Your is my favorite place to be
Your like a biggest castle in my life
Your is my favorite hero
Your like a biggest ocean in my life

[Pre-Chorus]
Ur my Ironman
Ur my Superman
Ur the only one Everything to me
Please just stay with me
Always be my side
I really just always need is…

[Chorus]
You yu yu yu uu
When I try to fall back, I fall back to..
You yu yu yu uu
When i talk to my mom, i talk about..
You yu yu yu uu
When i meet my friends, i just think about…
Youu yu yu yu uu
I really just always need is you

I really just always need is you
I really just always need is you
I really just always need is you
I really just always need is…

[Rap]
Your the twinkle to my eyes
And cream to my ice
Blue in my sky
Light in my heart
Spring in my step
Bumble to my bee
Jewel on my crown
Milk to my shake
Flip to my flop
Beat of my heart
Love of my life

[Verse 3]
Your my favorite place to be
Your like a biggest sunrise I ever seen
I just want to be with you
Because u always be my favorite hero

[Pre-Chorus]
Ur my Ironman
Ur my Superman
Ur the only one Everything to me
Please just stay with me
Always be my side
I really just always need is..

[Chorus]
You yu yu yu uu
When i try to fall back, I fall back to..
You yu yu yu uu
When i talk to my mom, i talk about..
You yu yu yu uu
When i meet my friends, i just think about…
You yu yu yu uu
I really just always need is you

[midi]

가사도 멜로디도 무난하지만 무난한것이 좋은것은 아닙니다. 특별함이 필요합니다.
특별한 이야기를 만드는 가장 쉬운 방법은 당신의 이야기를 하는것 입니다.
당신만큼 특별한 것은 없기 때문입니다.
거기에 상상력을 좀더 첨가한다면 더 좋은 이야기를 만들수 있을겁니다.
앞으로 많은 발전이 기대됩니다. 노력해 주세요
처음 해보는것 치고는 잘 했다고 생각합니다. 화성학을 배우고 코러스를 넣는 법을 배운다면 좋을것 같습니다.
랩의 플로우가 좋습니다. 라임을 맞추는 연습도 도움이 될것 같네요.
기존곡들의 MR을 다운 받아 멜로디를 만드는 연습을 하면 많은 도움이 될것입니다.
감사합니다.

[meyeah]

https://youtu.be/M1diUa4_QDo

[meyeah]

memories (aami)

Memories don’t want to let go
Lookin’ back, I wanna relive every moment
Won’t forget the past which made us the happiest
Just wanna go back in time now

Close to my heart these memories
The ones that I can never ever forget

It used to be always smiles and laughter
Now I just wish I could bring myself back to
The happiness we felt in those moments
I wanna feel it again now

Take me back to the good old days again
Find me a way to feel alive again
Ain’t no pain I just wanna reminisce
Hey yeah oh hey yeah

Smiles on our faces I see it clearly
Stories we shared still fresh on my mind
Now I see myself smilin’ again, hey

smilin’ again, hey
smilin’ again, hey

Remember all the times you and me we’d go for drives
You told me you, you want us to not let go in all our lives
Watching sky, and counting stars we spent all those nights
Shone the brightest of them all under the moonlight you

[midi]

탑라인 작업을 하기 위해서는 로직이나 큐베이스 또는 밴드랩 같은 앱의 사용법을 익히는게 중요합니다.
작곡작업을 계속 배우고 진행 하고 싶다면 먼저 앱의 사용법 부터 익힙시다 로직을 강력하게 추천 합니다