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  • milinda

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    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDf672FzrDg&ab_channel=JGNATION

  • alifia

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    https://youtu.be/iLaotI54I9g

    • alifia

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      Rap

      Heal the world better save for our child yeah
      Better place better neighborhood yeah
      Make a little space
      Make a better place
      You and i, entire human race
      Growing up with love, spread it all over the world
      For you all my brother and sister
      너의 같은 난, 나의 같은 넌
      우리가 하나 같은 꿈

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:15 오후
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      주어진 mr을 사용하지 않고 한 키 올려서 불렀군요!
      고음에서 끝음처리가 미숙한 편입니다. 끝음처리를 바꾸려는 노력보다 고음의 발성 자체를 바꾸는 편이 빠를것 같습니다.
      레슨의 고음 발성 편을 수강 해주세요 박자가 전체적으로 빨라요 조금씩 딜레이를 준다는 생각으로 부르는게 좋겠습니다.
      그래도 감정 전달이 잘되는 인상적인 보컬입니다.

  • sabrina-ivy

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    https://youtu.be/UmAL3uEU_hg

  • anna-mineeva

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    https://youtu.be/UulkIzfL2Zw

  • via

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    https://youtu.be/nsTwWKAKhco

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:19 오후
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      비앙카의 보컬실력을 다 보여 주지 못한것 같습니다.
      저음 발성이 전혀 안되고 있고 감정 전달도 미숙합니다. 연습부족이라고 밖에 생각되지 않습니다.
      연습을 더 열심히 해주세요.

  • daria

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    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FKui8hwAvGQ

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:20 오후
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      청음과 시창 연습을 열심히 하세요

  • anna

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    https://youtu.be/auyFSGsNT6c

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:22 오후
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      저음발성이 전혀 안되는 군요. 저음 발성 연습을 많이 해주세요. 저음의 음정이 전혀 맞지 않습니다.

  • Lita

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    https://youtu.be/XyOrqWu1Wjo

    • Lita

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      02/04/2022 at 1:03 오후
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      (Rap)
      We are here to heal
      We are here to love
      We are here to create not, not destroyed

      Learning how to shares,
      Learning how to loves,
      We’re all in one together to share our loves.

      If you want to kno why ..
      Theres a love cannot lie, because
      Love is strong love is joyful giving
      You can cry everday but please, please dont be weak
      We make a better world with.. with our loves.

      (2)
      Aaaahhhh…. aaaaa…. aaaa….

      Stop the hate
      Spread this love
      Make a better place you and for me

      Stop the hate
      Spread this love
      Make a better place you and for me

      Stop the hate
      Spread this love
      Make a better place you and for me

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:24 오후
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      입을 더 크게 벌리고 입안의 울림을 이용해서 볼륨을 더 키워야 합니다. 소리를 크게 내는 연습을 해주세요.

  • Lita

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    02/04/2022 at 7:51 오전
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    https://youtu.be/5QaZ1V9p1sQ

  • dasha

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    https://youtu.be/qeZJGHYGHgA

  • dasha

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    https://youtu.be/Ub1HSJqFkNs

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:26 오후
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      다샤는 발성 기초 레슨을 수강하도록 해주세요

  • milinda

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    02/04/2022 at 8:15 오전
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    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6AvrSh8VMDk&ab_channel=JGNATION

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:31 오후
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      음을 끝까지 밀지 않고 중간에 끊어 버리는 습관이 있네요
      호흡이 끝날때까지 한음으로 이어 부르는 연습을 해봅시다.
      목소리에 숨을 더 많이 넣어서 발성해 봅시다.

  • kseshka

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    02/04/2022 at 8:36 오전
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    목이 이직도 아파서 잘 못해서 죄송합니다. 다음번에 건강하게 열심히 연습할게요.
    https://youtu.be/LTRSUVpFrxU

  • meyeah

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    02/04/2022 at 8:49 오전
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    https://youtu.be/pnlEBy6EurE

    • meyeah

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      02/04/2022 at 12:35 오후
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      Rap:
      For the kids yeah, we can make a better tomorrow
      For the future generations to live free of sorrow
      A happier place yeah, where nobody knows of tears
      Together we’ll survive all obstacles and fears
      The sun rises for another day another struggle
      We gotta push ourselves forward despite the trouble
      Won’t give up won’t let anyone snatch away our dreams
      Won’t get swayed protect each other from evil deeds
      Holding on runnin’, working hard for hope and peace
      We won’t give up no matter we’ll make this win
      For the sake of love unity and virtue we live
      All united regardless of gender or race
      Together now we’ll heal this world

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:36 오후
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      아미는 날이 갈수록 보컬 실력이 나빠지는것 같아요 원인은 아마도 연습 부족이겠죠?
      박자를 세며 노래하는 연습을 해주세요

  • maria

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    02/04/2022 at 9:37 오전
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    https://youtu.be/OffSxqkiMck

    • maria

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      02/04/2022 at 9:41 오전
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      Rap part:

      Heal the world. Let’s save it with a little patience
      For every single person in the future generations.
      Is is so difficult to listen to each other’s feeling?
      Everything is possible if we have a true willing

      We could be happier, healthier, full of dreams and goals
      Stronger and wealthier, not wasting precious lifes on wars
      Love is strong. So open your heart to this feeling
      If you want to stop existing and start living

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:48 오후
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      저음 발성이 불안하고 음정이 불안 하네요 . 중간에 불필요하게 강한 발성이 있습니다.
      전문가의 디렉팅이 있었다면 훨씬 좋은 결과물이 나왔을 것 같습니다 . 고생 했습니다.

  • quian

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    02/04/2022 at 10:12 오전
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    https://youtu.be/bUFu2lfIPhk

    • quian

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      02/04/2022 at 10:12 오전
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      키얀 – Heal the World 보컬 커버 (편곡 있는 버전) Lyrics

      There’s a place in your heart
      And I know that it is love
      And this place it was brighter than tomorrow
      And if you really try
      You’ll find there’s no need to cry
      In this place you’ll feel there’s no hurt or sorrow

      There are ways to get there
      If you care enough for the living
      Make a little space
      Make a better place

      Heal the world
      Make it a better place
      For you and for me, and the entire human race
      There are people dying
      If you care enough for the living
      Make a better place for you and for me

      rap:
      heal the world
      theres nothing wrong loving

      이 세상을
      우리 사랑할게/요
      어렵지만, 작은 영웅 같은 큰거 체인지 만들
      now 부터

      lets raise our hands
      lets give our hearts
      lets heal the world and be the light
      for those (어둠속에서)

      Then it feels that always
      Love’s enough for us growing
      Make a better world
      So make a better world
      Heal the world
      Make it a better place
      For you and for me, and the entire human race
      There are people dying
      If you care enough for the living
      좋은 세상을 널 나랑 위해

      And the dream we were conceived in will reveal a joyful face
      And the world we once believed in will shine again in grace
      Then why do we keep strangling life
      Wound this earth, crucify its soul?
      Though it’s plain to see, this world is heavenly
      Be god’s glow

      We could fly so high
      Let our spirits never die
      In my heart I feel you are all my familly
      Create a world with no fear
      같이 웃어 눈물까지
      See the nations turn their swords into plowshares

      We could really get there
      If you cared enough for the living
      Make a little space
      To make a better place

      Heal the world
      Make it a better place
      For you and for me, and the entire human race
      There are people dying
      If you care enough for the living
      좋은 세상을 널 나랑 위해

      Heal the world
      Make it a better place
      For you and for me, and the entire human race
      모두 지켜줄게 힘든 빠지면 사랑 할게?
      Make a better place for you and for me

      Heal the world (heal the world)
      Make it a better place
      For you and for me, and the entire human race
      아마 슬픈 노래 근데 행복할 수 있을게
      Make a better place for you and for me
      There are people dying
      If you care enough for the living
      Make a better place for you and for me

      There are people dying
      If you care enough for the living
      Make a better place for you and for me
      You and for me (for a better place)
      You and for me (make a better place)
      You and for me (make a better place)
      You and for me (heal the world we live in)
      You and for me (save it for our children)
      You and for me (heal the world we live in)
      You and for me (save it for our children)
      You and for me (heal the world we live in)
      You and for me (save it for our children)
      You and for me (heal the world we live in)
      You and for me (save it for our children)

  • quian

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    https://youtu.be/S9Zzz4VuVto

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:50 오후
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      바이브레이션(비브라토)을 빼고 부르는 연습을 해주세요. 전혀 도움이 되지 않습니다.
      바이브레이션만 빠지면 아주 좋은 보컬입니다.

  • quian

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    https://youtu.be/nfJvzVYCXus

  • sonya

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    https://youtu.be/H-MA4-Y9yEk

    • vocal

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      Great!!

  • sonya

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    https://youtu.be/lyr3N8RYNKU

  • Unknown Member

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    https://youtu.be/YYKrZTWcnHs

  • pornchanok-saimai

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    https://youtu.be/HGf7QG8G0U0

  • pys1200

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    https://youtu.be/oLbx42aN8lg

    • pys1200

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      [verse 3]

      어두운 작은 방 홀로 울고 있는 나의 소중한 너
      여러 색의 따스한 소망을 모아 세상을 밝힐 무지개를 만들어
      긴 밤 달빛 아래 오늘도 너를 위해 기도해
      너란 빛이 꺼지지 않게 영원히 빛날 수 있게
      내 품에 안겨 you are not alone

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 9:59 오후
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      끝음을 비음으로 처리하는 습관이 있었군요.
      별로 좋은 창법이라고 생각되지 않습니다. 곡의 느낌을 살리기 위해 계획적으로 사용하는 비음과는 다른 느낌입니다.

  • Liara

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    02/04/2022 at 1:16 오후
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    https://youtu.be/aWjkmjcm2lo

  • Liara

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    https://youtu.be/Y6WUMCxAvV8

  • jiyusally

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    https://youtu.be/qbvoF-upvjo

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 10:05 오후
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      음역대에 따라 발성을 하고있는 성대의 위치가 제각각 입니다.
      가장 좋은 소리가 나는 성대의 위치를 느껴 보고 항상 그곳에서 모든 음역대의 소리가 나도록 연습해 주세요
      지금 본인이 생각하는 것보다 훨씬 노래를 잘 할수 있습니다. 자신감을 가지고 노래의 주인이라는 마음가짐으로 불러 봅시다.

  • nabob11

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    https://youtu.be/LXPOfIQ3v6E

    • vocal

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      12/04/2022 at 10:07 오후
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      WOW!

  • simran-baviskar

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    https://youtu.be/7jArIz3WjeM

    Rap lyrics:-
    Save this world so precious
    So blessed and so dear
    Protect it ‘s beauty and splendour
    Don’t let that disappear

    Preserve our animals and plants and humankind as well
    So that our future generation can have a story to tell
    Protect us from evil,and spread the world of good

    Of peace,love, justice, virtue and brotherhood

    Cause we only have one earth and we can’t waste our motherland
    So let’s move as one force
    I think it’s time to take a stand

  • vocal

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    12/04/2022 at 10:09 오후
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    입을 최대한 벌리고 노래 해주세요

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